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Juxtapose like tears and fears
make promises that you tend to break.
Scream from the top of your lungs,
shoot yourself in the head.
I don't need to hide..
I just want to love myself..
Daddy raped me when I was 12,
These bruises on my arm are so swell.
No thoughts were involved in this
I never thought it would be like this.


Never say a word again,
I will promise to love you.
Never run away from here,
I will try to comfort you.
I am your dad, I want to
come inside, I want to cum in you.
This is our little secret,
No one will come this way,
let silence run through your open
wounds. Let me dive, right in, I
will crawl inside of you.
Mommy will never know,
She can't hear you scream



Metaphors begin to break,
forming into similes
Vanish this into air,
My writing isn't clear.





Mommy says it's okay with her,
If i touch you,
If i tell you i love you,
If i scream your name,
If i have an orgasm.










Daddy loves when I'm naked,
                Daddy loves when I am wet.


I might not struggle,
                It might feel too good.


America is so fucked up,
                Daddy is so fucked up.


His sperm created me,
                Now its going into me.



didn't happen to me, but it might of happened to you. you can't rape the willing.
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opanoma Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Hilarious
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thecryingsoul Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007   Writer
You can tell it hasn't happened to you. . . someone who went through wouldn't be able to tell such details and say such phrases. . . I should know. . . It is quite beautiful and powerful though
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Twilightmia Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2007
I made a story about a girl this happend to her yeah, sad story, sad poem but nicely done.

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The dragon is in us all
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Black-Jaguar Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2005   Writer
Full of powerful emotions!! Great work!!:clap:
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runa-lilyanna-snape Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2005
very nice flow to it
+fav
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drippingblood Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2005
thank you very much
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george917 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2003  Hobbyist Photographer
graphic, powerful, and like antigrrl said, so blunt...

as depressing as it is, its great
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thecryingsoul Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2003   Writer
Holy crap I should have read this a long time ago. The same thing happened to me. For 6years. From the age of 5-11. I know what it is like. It hurts. I can tell it really damaged your soul in some way. I hated my dad for a long time before I started to over come it. I am 17 now and I still can't even look at his picture. I still love him. I don't know why but I do. It was amazingly brave of you to share this with total strangers! :d I applaud you for that *clap, clap*

*~suzy~*
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drippingblood Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2003
thing is i never went through it, a lot of people seem to think i did but i didnt. but im glad you enjoyed this in a way.. and im also glad ur starting to come over it.. <3
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devart-critic Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2003   Writer
Strong. Powerful. Expressive. Fantastic.

I can't imagine how you fwlt getting into the mindset to write this. Incredibley ballsy also, well done. I applaud you.
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