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E X I T M U S I C [--for the soul--]









































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She was silent in her return and I was just
a forgotten fairy-tale. My wings were gone
        my heart decayed
and my soul was untouched.

She was awake from her sleep and I had
        remembered her eyes, dim but cacophonous,
still pulchritudinous when I needed information.

I took a different approach for my next
inspiration--this was the beginning but
        it was her exit--


Relying on Infinite as I gain back
60 seconds of my life without your approval.
I observed every gallon of .oxygen.
                                that .

                Let down
                        Let down

My active time was 8.47
my love increased up to 12.74
If I went back those numbers
would decrease
I was in the 42nd row right
next to her, her mind was in
the 82nd row right next to
my exit.

                Her mouth was long and so
was her faith.
                It can not be avoided
her time was ticking
                her time was gone.


100 feet away minus the 10 that led you to
        that taxi, I would lay
                a note on top of your
        dresser, I would bend
                at the sound of the
clock watching me
        as it moved from 10
                to 8 // 7 to 65

She lost her nerve
                "You can't do this by yourself"

And now we are one in
everlasting peace
And this is her exit, her beginning, her
middle, her beginning, her exit, her
middle,
                        her beginning,
her middle,
                                                                                      her e X i t.
©2003-2010 ~drippingblood
:icondrippingblood:

Author's Comments

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Im odd haven't you noticed?
Not my usual
but then again
nothing I do
is usual.


Radiohead - Exit Music (For A Film)
Wake from your sleep,
the drying of your tears,
Today we escape, we escape.

Pack and get dressed
before your father hears us,
before all hell breaks loose.

Breathe, keep breathing,
don't lose your nerve.
Breathe, keep breathing,
I can't do this alone.

Sing us a song,
a song to keep us warm,
there's such a chill, such a chill.

And you can laugh a spineless laugh,
we hope your rules and wisdom choke you.

And now we are one
in everlasting peace,

we hope that you choke, that you choke,
we hope that you choke, that you choke,
we hope that you choke, that you choke.

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:iconaxis-:
beautiful


--
:----------------------------- --------------------------:
I find my self in the unfortunate position of being
for the war but against the troops.
:----------------------------- ---------------------------:
<a href="http://axis-.deviantart. com/journal/
:iconalcoholic:
You are so brilliant in your abstracted weirdness that - most likely - people like me cannot completely understand, but I have an idea. For the most part I catch what you are saying, but you have such a unique sense of metaphor that it is hard to extract. I love you for that.

--
To imitate popular culture, is to limitate personal growth.
:iconlordmarcus:
another lovley poem by you, great work

--
yippie!
:iconnoctambula:


yes.


i like this.....

very
:iconignite:
i recently met a girl who had no idea how beautiful she was. i'm glad nothing you do is usual.
:iconcrystalcage:
Oddness carries beauty

--
"Would you be there, when the lights get shot out?!" CL
:iconnattle:
"100 feet away minus the 10 that led you to that taxi, I would lay a note on top of your dresser"

Love that part. Love the whole thing really. And if it's different, it only makes us think more and what could be wrong with that?

Beautiful Heart
:iconmrjohnson:
...I dont get it? Yeah, thats probably it. The (apparently) random punctuation/bold/italic things just added to that - I saw no meaning or addition to the poem through them, other than one, the "Infinite".... as the I was capitalized, so I associated it to the infinite aspect, and considered I as being infinite.

But other than that, Im fucking befuddled.

--
Who invited you?
Get your head out of my ass, already.
And get me naked pictures of Britney Spears and her bodacious ta-tas.
:iconxcarebearx:
interesting carrie....very interesting. You have such a way of expressing yourself in your writing. Its marvelous really.
I need to learn how to write again...I cant seem to do it. but enough about me =P (Razz)
beautiful job carrie, really, its mysterious and awesome at the same time. :D (Big Grin)
Heart
~Caylee

--
Look me in the heart
and unbreak broken,
it won't happen...

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