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CUTTING YOU IN PIECES ----- by ~drippingblood:icondrippingblood:





Every inch of your body I could taste,
Every inch of your body I have tasted,
Love or Lust either way Is fine with me,
As long as I hold you in my arms again.
Or at least this last time.

Would you like to be a memory or be mine?
Would you like to stay or go?
Step by step I watch you hold your light,
Get me through this heartache and pain,
Set me free with your gentle touch.

Then watch me cut your fucking throat out,
As I drive the knife through your heart..
which now belongs to me. Why should I let
you live? For you to live is for me to die.
For you to love again is for me to hate.

Don't you fucking leave me again,
Don't you fucking speak, As I lay you
down on the ground you seem so innocent,
How could I have known you were a disgusting,
lifeless whore.

Trust me baby, It is better this way.
Why would you want to keep going?
Why?
Please tell me my love, My god..
How could I have loved you!
Stop begging, Whores love to beg,
I don't have a dick so stop begging.
Please stop..your making me sick
I think I still love you,
Maybe I am going crazy.
Maybe I am losing my mind.
I wish to wake up now.

To bad this was only a dream.
I look beside me, and I see you..
As I allways say..you look so much more
beautiful dead..then alive.
©2002-2010 ~drippingblood
:icondrippingblood:

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*ponders about what to say* ....

Theres no Love in fear.

Remember Ill love you as i throw your fucking throat there will be no other way .. - Tool

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:iconfatelessmirror:

Beautiful picture, stunning. It seems there is fear in love...
Just remeber, one day love might be all that we have left...and this in words...

no ways to battle
falling through the years
with each dreams disappear
followed by a trail of tears
no reason to turn back
to leave white to retain black
I know you’ll be all right
so don’t leave me tonight

:iconxcarebearx:
wow....another amazing piece of work by you Heart

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Look me in the heart
and unbreak broken,
it won't happen...
:iconlordmarcus:
at first its a rather lovley poem, then it goes into a dark almost death type poem, good job. i wish i could write as good as you

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yippie!
:iconsexpistols:
:o (Eek) speechless ! this is great, kind of sad, but still love it :D (Big Grin) +fav
:iconbroken-soul:
it starts out loving then goes dark....i like that..its very nice....excellent work on this

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"Lifes a bitch and then you die,
Drugs are bad so lets get high,
Sex is evil,
Evil are sins,
Sins are forgiven,
So lets begin."
:iconbroken-soul:
ncie pic to go with it to...

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"Lifes a bitch and then you die,
Drugs are bad so lets get high,
Sex is evil,
Evil are sins,
Sins are forgiven,
So lets begin."
:iconcrystalcage:
captured the emotion done
the craziness
the passion
the obssession
wicked

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"Would you be there, when the lights get shot out?!" CL
:iconpisschrist:
this actually gave me tingles, it was fucking awesome. i love how you started off the poem sweetly, and then jumped in with...

Then watch me cut your fucking throat out,
As I drive the knife through your heart..
which now belongs to me. Why should I let
you live? For you to live is for me to die.
For you to love again is for me to hate.

/fav
:iconiamwideasleep:
As I allways say..you look so much more
beautiful dead..then alive.

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i Love it

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HEY you, yeah you....go check out my junk
:iconstormclouds:
HOLY SHIT! This is SOOOO awesome! This is perpetually one of the best poems I have EVER read. And I'm not even CLOSE to kidding! I don't know what made you write this, but I'm glad that it did. I am SO adding this to my favorites. Incredible work, as always.

~Emm Horns ...in fact..I think you get double horns.

Horns Horns

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